Tuesday, 31 January 2012

Very early taster of book 2


      Chapter 1

     Watching for the dawn. That’s what it’s all about, isn’t it? Survival. Just waiting for that old sun to come up 
again, even though there’s no certainty it’ll do so; something that’s happened billions of times before is no more 
fated to do so again because of it.
     Sitting in darkness, the black sky dotted with petals of punctuation, dawn and then daybreak gradually 
appeared. As the sun rose in the east, splaying its oak frayed rays towards the church Wall stood up and walked
under the upper branches of the yew tree towards the padlocked gate. Beside it was one of those two-part 
gateways that always infuriated him; enter the semi-circular iron pen, pull the hinged gate towards you and slip 
around the side of it, pushing it back to the side you’ve just come from.
    There’s got to be a proper name for it, this type of gateway, though Wall had his own choice: bastard.

Photos

Hoping to take some photos of the remaining locations this Thursday and will upload them soon after. The mosque, Severn Terrace, Stow Hill adjacent to the cathedral...

Random?

The locations of the serial murders in the novel were chosen randomly by me at first. It was only after I started looking at a map of Newport that I noticed the places I had chosen were related to each other, as described in the book.

And so the remaining murders - probably 3 or 4 - were chosen deliberately to fit this new pattern. But yes, to those who have asked me, 5 or 6 of the sites were plucked from the air (the air inside my brain, that is) without knowing they would line up.

When I began writing the novel, there was no grand plan; as usual with my writing, there is an element (if not a whole bag of them) of the words writing themselves. This might lead at some point to me drafting a rough outline plan of the story, but it's likely to be very loose and indeterminate.

Perhaps this comes from my interest, as a teenager, in Surrealism and 'automatic writing'?

So anyway, I wrote this novel as I went along, usually with little or no idea what would happen next. I like this method, and it suits me. I can pick up threads, change direction and include new research and interests as and when they arise. A bit like web surfing: one place leads you to another, which in turns leads...

Once I knew that the murders had been committed (?) according to 'ley lines' in the city, I knew exactly what I needed to do. What direction to take it in if I was ever in control of the flow of words, and I also knew from that what sort of character the killer was.

The ending was a complete surprise to me. Written almost manically over a week or so, listening to the same songs and pieces of music on repeat, this was certainly a case of me just being there to physically type the words as they flowed through my fingers to the keyboard.

I will post here later which music it actually was that drove me to the conclusion of the novel. But the Cocteau Twins were a large part of the engine.

Sunday, 29 January 2012

But before No.2.....

...will come The Boy Who Zoomed. Also finished a while back and currently undergoing a final 'spit and polish', it's a full-length adventure novel for older children / young teens. It should be available to download within the next month and itself might turn out to be the first in a series featuring the same characters. However, nothing has yet been written for a follow-up. Watch this space...

No.2 in series

Watching For The Dawn, the 2nd. novel in the Ed Wall P.I. series, was all but finished some time ago. With just a few chapters left to write then some editing and a bit of 'spit and polish', it should be published by summer 2012.

Names, source


Drummers:

Goulding - Mekons   used
Norton - Husker Du   used
Ely - p furs      used
Baker - McCarthy    used
Sharrock - Icicle Works
King - Hawkwind    used (as Krol)
Sharrock - Icicle Works
Ainge - Felt
Morgan - Primal Scream
Baillie - Skids



Bassists:

Roback - Rain Parade    used
Butler - p furs      used
Hayes - Van Morrison     used
Williamson - McCarthy      used
Shaw - Hawkwind     used
Layhe - Icicle Works
Young - Primal Scream
Webb - Skids

Quotes


"Be united, alert, earnest and lively." - Mao

"We are Marxists, and Marxism teaches that in our approach to a problem we should start from objective facts, not from abstract definitions, and that we should derive our guiding principles, policies and measures from an analysis of these facts." - Mao 1942 - used Ch. 46

"Enable every woman who can work to take her place on the labour front, under the principle of equal pay for equal work. This should be done as quickly as possible." - Mao, 1955

"An army without culture is a dull-witted army, and a dull-witted army cannot defeat the enemy." - Mao 1944 [used: Ch. 22]

"Don't wait until problems pile up and cause a lot of trouble before trying to solve them. Leaders must march ahead of the movement, not lag behind it." - Mao 1955

"What we need is an enthusiastic but calm state of mind and intense but orderly work." - Mao 1936 - [used: Ch. 21]


'We are like babies learning to walk' - Pol Pot


Oblivion



Death was in the thing, moving;
a whirlpool unfurling. I studied its
paw, a claw of rigor animated
by an army of blind things...


When the mud puddled,

settled to a dumb function,

the blind things huddled,

hundreds alone, befuddled.



It lay stiff riddled with a

look of alarm; stunned by the

moment of death it arrested,

numbness crumbling a lifetime.



Pumped dumb with a whiteness,

bleached, I thumbed the thing.

Its body was cold, death had it.

Only the rumbling of grubs

         made it sing. Sing.


Welcome!

I'm hoping to post background information, research, tips and teasers about my new book. It would be great to get feedback from readers!